a story

some of it is made up tho, not all tho...
how is it deep? do you like it? o.o

It's emotional o_o, lotsa feelings 'n yeah.
Yes, of course I like it! -.-

oh o_o how is it emotional?

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well i want to know what you think of it tho

I already said I think it's deep... o_o

I know I mean that isn't really much of an opinion though.. "it's deep" "how" "because its emotional" YES BUT WHAT DO YOU THINK of it like
anyway
Like, do yu have any criticism? Like, what should I fix..? or is there anythnig I should imporve on? anything good or bad?? D:

^ Your words flow too fast.

oh. o_o well I've never been able to fix that seeing as really no one I've ever asked gave me that information. thanks

so um.. Mocha... what about you?

I know I mean that isn't really much of an opinion though.. "it's deep" "how" "because its emotional" YES BUT WHAT DO YOU THINK of it like
anyway
Like, do yu have any criticism? Like, what should I fix..? or is there anythnig I should imporve on? anything good or bad?? D:

....

hi

never mind :|

I don't know what to say o_o sorry

Sorry, was just thinkin' maybe you might wanna slow down and focus on one thing at a time... [?]

I do that, but I'm not really necessarily even going for anything in this story.. I don't know why I named it story because it's more of a creative writing thing I guess... lol cos I'm just shooting out shit that comes out of my mind.. I always do that and that's pretty much how I write... I can't really help it if I'm talking about three things at once cos in some way or another I'll always end up making those things tie together. I don't honestly care about how I write, I do like people's opinions on it but most of it in the long run has seemed negative lol (not you ash, I'm talking about people in RL that say negative things.)
Plus i take things way too seriously and way too much to the heart ... lol i mean look what i just typed i really overreacted :X

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oh but people in rl dont know shit about writing so therefore their opinions are shit and crap and they read shit books too and in fact dont read at all so technically they dont have very good opinions. i need to find people who can better critique my stuff like you ash .lol.

i talk too much

Alrighty then.