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26a story - Page 2 Empty Re: a story on Mon Jun 21, 2010 8:24 am

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some of it is made up tho, not all tho...
how is it deep? do you like it? o.o

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27a story - Page 2 Empty Re: a story on Mon Jun 21, 2010 8:26 am

Mocha

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It's emotional o_o, lotsa feelings 'n yeah.
Yes, of course I like it! -.-

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28a story - Page 2 Empty Re: a story on Mon Jun 21, 2010 8:27 am

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oh o_o how is it emotional?

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29a story - Page 2 Empty Re: a story on Mon Jun 21, 2010 8:29 am

Mocha

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...

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30a story - Page 2 Empty Re: a story on Mon Jun 21, 2010 8:30 am

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well i want to know what you think of it tho

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31a story - Page 2 Empty Re: a story on Mon Jun 21, 2010 8:31 am

Mocha

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I already said I think it's deep... o_o

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32a story - Page 2 Empty Re: a story on Mon Jun 21, 2010 8:33 am

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I know I mean that isn't really much of an opinion though.. "it's deep" "how" "because its emotional" YES BUT WHAT DO YOU THINK of it like
anyway
Like, do yu have any criticism? Like, what should I fix..? or is there anythnig I should imporve on? anything good or bad?? D:

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33a story - Page 2 Empty Re: a story on Mon Jun 21, 2010 8:34 am

^ Your words flow too fast.

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34a story - Page 2 Empty Re: a story on Mon Jun 21, 2010 8:37 am

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oh. o_o well I've never been able to fix that seeing as really no one I've ever asked gave me that information. thanks

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35a story - Page 2 Empty Re: a story on Mon Jun 21, 2010 8:40 am

kat

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so um.. Mocha... what about you?

I know I mean that isn't really much of an opinion though.. "it's deep" "how" "because its emotional" YES BUT WHAT DO YOU THINK of it like
anyway
Like, do yu have any criticism? Like, what should I fix..? or is there anythnig I should imporve on? anything good or bad?? D:
....

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36a story - Page 2 Empty Re: a story on Mon Jun 21, 2010 8:41 am

Mocha

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hi

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37a story - Page 2 Empty Re: a story on Mon Jun 21, 2010 8:42 am

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never mind :|

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38a story - Page 2 Empty Re: a story on Mon Jun 21, 2010 8:42 am

Mocha

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I don't know what to say o_o sorry

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39a story - Page 2 Empty Re: a story on Mon Jun 21, 2010 8:43 am

Sorry, was just thinkin' maybe you might wanna slow down and focus on one thing at a time... [?]

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40a story - Page 2 Empty Re: a story on Mon Jun 21, 2010 8:48 am

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I do that, but I'm not really necessarily even going for anything in this story.. I don't know why I named it story because it's more of a creative writing thing I guess... lol cos I'm just shooting out shit that comes out of my mind.. I always do that and that's pretty much how I write... I can't really help it if I'm talking about three things at once cos in some way or another I'll always end up making those things tie together. I don't honestly care about how I write, I do like people's opinions on it but most of it in the long run has seemed negative lol (not you ash, I'm talking about people in RL that say negative things.)
Plus i take things way too seriously and way too much to the heart ... lol i mean look what i just typed i really overreacted :X

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oh but people in rl dont know shit about writing so therefore their opinions are shit and crap and they read shit books too and in fact dont read at all so technically they dont have very good opinions. i need to find people who can better critique my stuff like you ash .lol.


i talk too much

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41a story - Page 2 Empty Re: a story on Mon Jun 21, 2010 9:00 am

Alrighty then.

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